Love letter for Eva Films

So I'm doing a Video to create a Facebook Ads for Eva Films. In the video I think I miss some audio effects, maybe some voices. Seems incomplete. This is the first draft...

So I'm writing something that could be recorded as a voice over in male voice. Our target are girls that are engaged. Soon, they will be looking for vendors, flowers, wedding photographers, wedding film-makers... Our target are girls that will get married so we need to be talking to them.

So here a bit of brainstorm...

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Every Couple Have 

A Begging

A Story To Tell

A Unique Path 

Love To Celebrate

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We Love To Film Their Love Histories

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Since the first time I saw you

I knew

You are the love of my life

And we'll be creating amazing histories

Together.

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The first time I saw you

I knew

You are the love of my life

We both know we'll be creating 

Amazing histories together

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Since the first time I saw you

I knew

You are the love of my life

And we'll be creating amazing histories

Together, 

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So, part of my process, was looking into some inspiration... and I just realized that all the "love letters" have huge implications that are not align of what I believe. They are loaded with tons of responsibilities that you put on the other. Almost that your life depends on them... things like "my life doesn't have sense without you", "You complete me" and I think this is not taking responsibility of your emotions. I wanted to write a love letter but without this heavy weight you can put in the shoulders of the other. For your happiness or being complete as a person. I understand all those things comes from an emotional state. And emotions are not connected with our language. Are hard to connect, articulate in words. So many people use figurative exaggerations to try to express this feelings, the emotions of love. 

I believe you can still use figurative expressions, exaggerate the right way. 

So I came with this... 

The full version.

Hey Dream Girl,

The day you came into my life you made everything better, those moments together are part of our love story.

I want to thank you for all the good things you bring to our relationship. The warmth and care. The beautiful memories and emotions you make me feel. For the kind words. Your dedication to make things happen.

You changed my life in one moment. And the only thing I want is to be a better person... for you, for us.

You are the girl I always dreamed to be with. 

Thank you for your beautiful affection. Your smile. Your love.

The short version / updated version.

Hey Dream Girl,

The day you came into my life you made everything better. 

I want to thank you for all the good things you bring to our relationship. The emotions you make me feel and the beautiful memories we are about to create. 

Thank you for changing my life for good. 

You are the girl of my dreams. Thank you for your beautiful presence in my life, your smile and your love.  

I promise I will love you forever and the only thing I want is to be a better person for you... for us.